I kinda thought they would stay on the beach ;)
Anyway, I liked the beginning of your story and how you described their situations. You do have some mistakes in the first part of the story, like calling “your” friends Brooke and Emma and I had to figure out how Summer fit into it 😹 that might be because English isn’t my first language though ;)
Anyway, I‘d like to read more :)Author's Response: THIS FEELING IS LOVE.
Reviewed by: Makemesparkle on 12/31/2017 🚫 ❇ 🚩
Ahh thank you!!
Haha well they take it back to his room, in the middle of writing it now, it's a bit x-rated 🙊🙈
Yes, there were a few mistakes I'd missed - thanks for letting me know, have gone back and changed them.
Next chapter up tomorrow hopefully!! :)