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Duh, if you hadn’t mentioned Clementine, I would have forgot about her, too xD
But you didn’t mention when they met up with Joel’s little family. You just said they weren’t at the whole family meeting because Nicole and Harlow were sick.
But anywaaay! I love it, as always 😍❤️ -
I’m on Benji‘s side now xD he told her he wanted to know when she would be pregnant again and she still didn’t tell him... she should be really happy that he forgave her so fast!
Great as always ❤️❤️❤️
Author's Response: Thanks, at least Benji isn't a tool anymore :P But yes he is lucky I was going to have him be mad at her but in the end, I scrapped that idea. -
I love this chapter!!!
It’s so cute how Benji is fighting with his feelings at the beginning and now they are officially in love with each other ❤️❤️❤️🎉🎉🎉
And I had to laugh so hard at Joel at the end 😹 omg just imagine this scene 😹😹😹
Author's Response: Siblings are always great comic relief :) Also when i reread his confession i get all teary haha -
This was really beautiful! The way Benji took care of her and Maddox and I liked the idea with the vial!
I also think it’s great that he told her he didn’t know what to feel! Because him suddenly understanding his feelings would be way too unlikely right now. You did a great job on writing this and I can’t wait for them to be happy again ❤️ -
When I started reading this chapter I was so happy that Leah pushed Benji away. I think this was the first time ever that I wanted the woman to say 'no'!
But now I am almost crying, this is so sad!
I kinda think that this tragic thing will bring them closer together but it is still really sad!!
I hope they can get through these hard times and find happiness in each other again!
Author's Response: I cried too but it had to happen for the plot to work... I don't want to have to write something like that let alone experience it :( -
I know you said that I should get used to a Benji who is pissing me off, but I just can’t 😹 I wanna grab his shoulders and shake him so badly!!
Poor Kat :( her hormones are going wild and the one she loves is too blind to see it.
I cannot wait for more :D
And I still hate Leah, even if it was just her name showing up in this chapter xD
And Joel’s responses were funny and I think he nailed it right on the spot!
Author's Response: Oh me too when I wrote this chapter. But don't worry maybe soon he'll figure it out and realize what's going on. I kind of made Joel like I would be in the chapter. I can be very blunt and honest in some situations. I don't like sugar coating things especially in difficult situations. Going to upload the next chapter tonight after I get home. -
I am so sorry for Kat :( If she could just jump over her shadow and listen to her heart... but I guess Benji would stomp right over it because of Leah right now xD i really don’t like Leah at all 😹
Maddox is just amazing right now! Of course animals feel what’s going on :)
Btw does Benji know that he was her first? If not, is she ever going to tell him?
Author's Response: I think how I wrote it no he doesn't, and I can't tell you, you'll just have to wait and see :P no spoilers lol -
Oh my God!!! This is so great!
I am kinda pissed off at Benji that he still won’t listen to his heart, but I am so glad that Kat is slowly falling in love with Benji!
And now she is even pregnant:D I can’t wait for the next chapter!! ♥
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed :) Get used to being pissed with Benji... maybe he'll come round eventually :P -
You are totally right, I would not have expected this so soon! But I liked this chapter a lot :)
Seems like there is finally more than friendship growing between them! Even though I can understand Benji’s thoughts of Leah, because Kat is still 17! But it was great :D
And I totally love the horse and the stables part of your story because I used to go riding when I was a teenager :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I did lessons way back so my terminology is super rusty for horses, i usually use dogs in my stories as something the protagonist can turn too during stressful situations and I thought why not use a horse :P new chapter tonight after I get home from work so keep your eyes open
