Reviews For How Many Ways

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  • Reviewed by: Legna_angeL on 06/03/2010 🚩

    Your imagery was good and the conflict was excellent.  It will be interesting to see the rest of the series.  On ethics alone, one should despise Katrina, but you made her very likable, so even your reader is invested in the conflict: makes us want Katrina to somehow win :)

    Only cc I have is leaving out a couple prepositions and pronouns.  Very minor and mostly in the last half of the story. 

    Good job :D

    Author's Response: Thank you. I had re-read this and checked it (more like scanned) so I am sure I missed some things, I am glad you pointed them out. I will try to go back and look for them, thanks!
  • Reviewed by: ninfa992 on 06/01/2010 🚩
    OMG how is she going to look at her sister in the eyes now? n benji at the girl he claim to love .... cant wait to see the 2 part :D

    Author's Response: Thank you. I'll be writing the sequel at my next opportunity. Thank you!