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  • Reviewed by: Hiro-san on 09/09/2010 🚩
    it has drama, romance, .. everything.. god i even had a small tear in my eye when i read that part of joel killing himself.. that was so incredible sad.. i loved the happy ending. ^^ good job
  • Reviewed by: joey_rocks on 05/25/2010 🚩
    I have to say I LOVE this story.
    Second time reading, because its so good. :D But it is well writen, and detailed. :) Keep writing. x
  • Reviewed by: Legna_angeL on 12/17/2009 🚩

    There are many authors and writers who have perfect grammar, a large vocabulary, and a seemingly innate sense of language structure.  They write eloquent pieces; literary perfection; following every linguistical rule to a "T".

    But these "perfectionists" still suck because they lack what you have: ability.

    A story must have the ability to be driven by the emotions of its characters and what is more it must stir emotion within the reader.  Capturing interest and telling a passionate tale are rare traits in any writer.  How nice to find them in you!  I would give up the "perfectionists" any day, for one story, such as this one, told with raw emotion and sincere feeling.  Those stories are the ones that matter, even if you don't always agree with everything in them, you still have to respect the art and the artist.

    And yes, IMHO, yours was that good.  In fact, it was damn good!

    Author's Response: Wow. Thank you. I don't think anyone has ever spoken of my writing with that regard.
  • Reviewed by: beckylovesjoel on 06/06/2009 🚩
    Aww this was lovely :]
  • Reviewed by: volcanofire on 01/05/2009 🚩
    This was so made me cry!!!

    I loved this story! Well written! :)
  • Reviewed by: ninfa992 on 12/29/2008 🚩
    is was a great story
    plz keep w ure work i love it :)
    hope read more