Reviews For Don't laugh at me

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  • Reviewed by: alysexx on 08/09/2008 🚩
    Good job for your first story. =]

    Author's Response: Thank you i was worried that nobody would like it..So thanks again!!
  • Reviewed by: burning x effigy on 08/05/2008 🚩
    remember to make a new paragraph when someone else begins to speak. other than that, I really like it. =)

    Author's Response: thanks beautiful
  • Reviewed by: ninfa992 on 07/12/2008 🚩

    write something like this but longer

    i loked it


    Author's Response: thank you ! :)