This is very good. I was a little disheartened by Benji's lack of concern for Billy, but am glad he called the motel for him. Nice job.Author's Response: :) Glad you enjoyed.
Benji wasn't meant to be not concerned. But this would have been earlier in their friendship, so the concern was there, it just wasn't as intense as it would be today. Besides, his mother was there--I can't imagine he'd want her knowing about little Billiam on his own. I've always see her as a very motherly person.