Reviews For The Approaching Curve

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  • Reviewed by: normal_loser on 09/03/2007 🚩
    I love it :) great job. it would be great if there was more :D
  • Reviewed by: Adrift on 09/02/2007 🚩
    Wow... This was f-ing beautiful.

    Gosh... I'm not sure what else to say. Magnificently brilliant. You've left me speechless.

    Author's Response: omg. That means fucking SHITLOADS coming from you cuz I adore your writing. Thanks so much for the review!
  • Reviewed by: eviltwin on 09/02/2007 🚩
    he dies? how can you do this to me? *cry*
  • Reviewed by: kissmedeadly on 09/02/2007 🚩
    ohh yes more! you can't just leave it at that lol such a cliffhanger. lol
  • Reviewed by: normal_loser on 11/30/2006 🚩
    yes do more
    cant wait for more
  • Reviewed by: iluvmybenji on 11/26/2006 🚩
    I had to review this.. it was just such an amazing story and I know that this is probably the fifith time I've read it... but yeah I love it. I think that you should leave it just the way it is. But then again I'm just a depressing whore like that.

    Lots Of Love

    Author's Response: ha, i love you. and thanks

  • Reviewed by: imissmymind on 11/26/2006 🚩
    Ahh... shit. lol

    Good story... only add more if you're planning on making it happy, though. Another chapter that would end up being "And then they died" would be kind of pointless because that's what the reader is assuming.

    Good job keeping my attention (I'm kind of ADD at the moment.) Very suspenseful, well written. I'd encourage a happy addition to the story, but it's your choice.

    Author's Response: thanks. it means a lot. I think I will add to it, but it may just take a while and a shitload of... inspiration? no, thats not the word i'm looking for but it's something of that nature....