If it were me I would have been reall scared. I luv this story it was very well written. I think the end is my favorite "I had heard the click of the gun as he cocked it. I had felt the blood drip out and fall from my fingertips, and finally I hear that last gasp of breath leave my lips.
And it was the greatest feeling in the world." Great job!
"He shoves the pistol into my stomach and kisses me once more, before I hear the cocking of the gun. I deepen the kiss, and soon, I feel the bullet enter me."
as soon as i read that, i got a pain in my stomach. amazing