LolaRaysAutoGirl
Real name: Abby
Member Since: 01/20/2005
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Wow. Hi. I write. This is exciting, eh?



Reviews by LolaRaysAutoGirl
  • Categories: Orphan
    Characters: None
    Genres: None
    Story Type: None
    Warnings: None
    Series: None
    Reviews:
    Completed: No
    Word count: 0
    Read Count: 0
    Chapters: 0
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    Published: 12/31/1969 - Updated:12/31/1969
  • Reviewed by: LolaRaysAutoGirl on 05/09/2005
    ooooo...sequel! *goes bug eyed* I can't wait. Nice way of ending, different. I'm surprised she didn't mention that she cut again. I think I would. Hmm...well, get the sequel up soon! You rock.

    Author's Response: She didn't want him to be angry with her. In hindsight it was stupid. But, Thanks so much. =)
  • Dog-sitter falls in love with employer Benji, only there’s one problem… he’s already taken.

    Categories: Het Pairings
    Characters: Benji/OFC
    Genres: Angst, Romance
    Story Type: None
    Warnings: None
    Series: None
    Reviews: 228
    Completed: Yes
    Word count: 11537
    Read Count: 7432
    Chapters: 10
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    Published: 01/18/2005 - Updated:02/23/2005
  • Reviewed by: LolaRaysAutoGirl on 01/31/2005
    Yay! You posted again! I read the begining of this a few months (?) ago and I loved it. I'm so glad you're gonna keep it going. Thanks a bunch! Update soon...poor Christine!

    Author's Response: This story is too fun to write to abandon, lol. I have a curse of starting and not finishing but I definitely won't leave anyone hanging on this one... or will I? *shifty eyes*
  • Reviewed by: LolaRaysAutoGirl on 02/06/2005
    I'll leave some love if you promise to update soon!!!!!!

    Author's Response: I promise :D
  • Reviewed by: LolaRaysAutoGirl on 02/09/2005
    I'm reviewing! Long wait. Worth it though. That was awesome. Benji's a jerk. So is Lori. I wonder what would happen if Christine started cutting and Benji noticed...that might be a bit cliched though. Keep up the AWESOME story!

    Author's Response: I'm glad to see you're still reading! I agree, cutting is a little cliche, but the only way to see what Chrissy does is to keep reading, right (lol)? I'll have an update for you soon, thank you!
  • Reviewed by: LolaRaysAutoGirl on 02/20/2005
    Holy...God...That was really good. I'm glad you decided to update. I can't wait for more. I wonder how Benji feels about this. I wonder if he even really knows that his fiance is just using him. (We're not THAT dumb...ha ha.) So, update soon.

    Author's Response: Benjis not the brightest crayon in the box, but I wouldn't put anything above him just yet XD. Thank you, I'll have 10 posted soon.
  • Reviewed by: LolaRaysAutoGirl on 02/23/2005
    jeez, I was freaking out until I saw the whole "sequel" thing. You scared me! Lol. That's a GREAT story. I can't wait for the sequel. I hope it won't take long to get started. *think ponies think ponies* I'll wait forever!

    Author's Response: Thank you doll :D. Ooh... ponies. Forget the sequel I wanna ride a pony! heh, just kiddin'.
  • "I'm stealing your dog," Jay yelled into the back lounge of the bus.

    Categories: Het Pairings
    Characters: Billy/OFC
    Genres: None
    Story Type: None
    Warnings: None
    Series: None
    Reviews: 11
    Completed: Yes
    Word count: 2974
    Read Count: 286
    Chapters: 1
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    Published: 01/19/2005 - Updated:01/19/2005
  • Reviewed by: LolaRaysAutoGirl on 05/24/2005
    Love ya SJI...alwayx excellent at everything... : ) *steals your talent*

    Author's Response: Thank you so much, hon! :D
  • Categories: Orphan
    Characters: None
    Genres: None
    Story Type: None
    Warnings: None
    Series: None
    Reviews:
    Completed: No
    Word count: 0
    Read Count: 0
    Chapters: 0
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    Published: 12/31/1969 - Updated:12/31/1969
  • Reviewed by: LolaRaysAutoGirl on 06/10/2005
    I liked the whole, 'since you're readin this, don't tell the cops where I am', but I think the ending was sort of abrubt. I liked the story, it was great. The ending was just kinda forced or something. Great job. : )

    Author's Response: Yeah. I did force the end so I could hurry up and finish the damn thing. lol! Thanks! :D
  • Shauna hangs out with a bunch of guys in a band....more they hangout with her. They make her laugh, smile, sad,mad, think,and question; But most important: they make her belong. That's all a friends suppose to be, right? So Why is she so distant? She has friends that love her to death....Literally. The students at La Plata High aren't the pinicole of niciness and neithier are the teachers, How much can she take before she bleeds? Gone on Hiatus, do to uncreativty at this time. . . Will be back soon. Reviews are still welcome.

    Categories: Het Pairings
    Characters: Billy/OFC
    Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
    Story Type: None
    Warnings: Self-Harm
    Series: None
    Reviews: 22
    Completed: No
    Word count: 5053
    Read Count: 337
    Chapters: 6
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    Published: 01/20/2005 - Updated:03/10/2005
  • Reviewed by: LolaRaysAutoGirl on 01/27/2005
    Awesome. *puts in favs* Billyness! Yeah! *screams: POWER TO THE BILLYS!* ok, ok, calm down. that was great. I've never seen the crow. i want to though. ha ha. So, um, yeah. That was great and I can't wait to read more. So...update soon! :)

    Author's Response: Awww! Thanx hun....Billiness? hum...I hope everyone knows that Billy's my kinky little rag doll *gasps* . Thanx again... :)
  • "He's been down on himself a lot lately, and I just feel like this would make him smile," he grinned as he ran a hand slowly through her short black hair.

    Categories: Het Pairings
    Characters: Chris/OFC
    Genres: None
    Story Type: None
    Warnings: None
    Series: None
    Reviews: 7
    Completed: Yes
    Word count: 1053
    Read Count: 87
    Chapters: 1
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    Published: 01/21/2005 - Updated:01/21/2005
  • Reviewed by: LolaRaysAutoGirl on 05/31/2005
    Poor Chris *sighs* nice job. : )

    Author's Response: Yes, I feel really awful that Paul ate Chris! :( lol Sorry, lame joke.
  • This is where we used to live. Used to. As in don’t anymore. It’s over. Although this isn’t entirely true. YOU still live here. That is why I had to break in.

    Categories: Person Centric
    Characters: Joel
    Genres: Angst
    Story Type: None
    Warnings: Violence
    Series: None
    Reviews: 14
    Completed: Yes
    Word count: 2105
    Read Count: 190
    Chapters: 1
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    Published: 01/22/2005 - Updated:01/22/2005
  • Reviewed by: LolaRaysAutoGirl on 05/29/2005
    Excellent...I loved it. Really descriptive and...I just loved the repetitiveness for the emphasism...it was absolutely wonderful. Nice job.
  • "I hate making decisions like this," Chris scratched at his baby fine layer of hair and sighed. "If I don't go home for three days, my family will piss and moan. If I go home, I'll waste $300 on a plane ticket and lose my sanity sitting in Utah when everyone else is-" "I'm not going home," Joel offered. Nina nodded. "Me either."

    Categories: Het Pairings
    Characters: None
    Genres: None
    Story Type: None
    Warnings: None
    Series: None
    Reviews: 9
    Completed: Yes
    Word count: 3950
    Read Count: 41
    Chapters: 1
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    Published: 01/22/2005 - Updated:01/22/2005
  • Reviewed by: LolaRaysAutoGirl on 05/29/2005
    Good job...that was cute.
  • Categories: Orphan
    Characters: None
    Genres: None
    Story Type: None
    Warnings: None
    Series: None
    Reviews:
    Completed: No
    Word count: 0
    Read Count: 0
    Chapters: 0
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    Published: 12/31/1969 - Updated:12/31/1969
  • Reviewed by: LolaRaysAutoGirl on 05/21/2005
    I absolutely loved that. It was so original, kudos!!! Hopefully, you've written other stories I can go amuse myself with now...*adds to fav. authors*

    Author's Response: I am so glad that you liked it, it really means a lot to me. Well, you can check out All In The Family...it's somewhat similar to this story.
  • "I am so fucking sick of this song," she hissed as she reached to change the station.

    Categories: Person Centric
    Characters: Joel
    Genres: Romance, Comedy
    Story Type: None
    Warnings: None
    Series: None
    Reviews: 6
    Completed: Yes
    Word count: 827
    Read Count: 236
    Chapters: 1
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    Published: 01/22/2005 - Updated:01/22/2005
  • Reviewed by: LolaRaysAutoGirl on 06/24/2005
    Haha, that was cute. Great job.

    Author's Response: Thank you, hon! :D
  • Miranda Robinson is a 17 year old girl from San Diego, California. Her parents died in a tragic car accident...and social services sent her to live with her aunt in Waldorf. While she begins her senior year at a new school, Miranda meets somebody that at first, she only see's as a really good friend. He doesn't understand that its hard for her to trust people because of all the times she's been hurt before. Will Miranda tell him the truth...or just live with a heart made of glass?

    Categories: Band Centric
    Characters: None
    Genres: Drama
    Story Type: None
    Warnings: None
    Series: None
    Reviews: 32
    Completed: Yes
    Word count: 24446
    Read Count: 1423
    Chapters: 13
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    Published: 01/22/2005 - Updated:02/05/2005
  • Reviewed by: LolaRaysAutoGirl on 02/04/2005
    Wow...I defenitely didn't see that one coming. That was an awesome chapter. I can't wait for more...The only thing I would suggest is that Joel comes into the story a little more...he can't just forget about Mandy FOREVER...dun dun dun...update soon. : )
  • Reviewed by: LolaRaysAutoGirl on 02/06/2005
    ARGH! That was soooo awesome. I can't wait fooorrrr more. I'm hyper. Please update soon. : )

    Author's Response: Lol...Sorry I haven't updated in a while..Been really busy witha bunch of other stories. Please be patient..I'll update soon. Thanx!
  • “You sick?” I asked. “Sort of,” He mumbled. “You shouldn’t play the show then.” A morbid smile played upon his face for a second. “Not like that, mentally. I think I’m insane.”

    Categories: Person Centric
    Characters: Billy
    Genres: Angst
    Story Type: None
    Warnings: Suicide
    Series: None
    Reviews: 27
    Completed: Yes
    Word count: 788
    Read Count: 159
    Chapters: 1
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    Published: 01/22/2005 - Updated:01/22/2005
  • Reviewed by: LolaRaysAutoGirl on 05/29/2005
    Neat-o...I liked that. : )

    Author's Response: Hehe thanks.
  • Her relationship towards everyone around her seemed so vague it was as if she was unseen, or uncared for. Between getting through college and avoiding a dangerous boyfriend, she never expected a rock star to completely reverse her outlook on life. She never expected to fall in love with him.

    Categories: Het Pairings
    Characters: Benji/OFC
    Genres: Romance
    Story Type: None
    Warnings: Violence
    Series: None
    Reviews: 283
    Completed: Yes
    Word count: 53870
    Read Count: 14832
    Chapters: 15
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    Published: 01/22/2005 - Updated:08/05/2006
  • Reviewed by: LolaRaysAutoGirl on 02/01/2005
    Yay! I don't know how you guys write such long chapters. I can't write long ones to save my life. That was awesome, as usual. I can't wait for chapter...-what is it?-8? Well, anyways, I can't wait for it. Awesome job. Update soon! : )

    Author's Response: It takes me a long time to write chapters. I hate posting short ones because I know what its like to be in the readers shoes, and no one wants a short chapter when they've waited so long for an update. Thanks :)
  • Reviewed by: LolaRaysAutoGirl on 03/05/2005
    Did you die or something? C'mon! We need updates. Hurry up! *kicks you* I must know what happens!

    Author's Response: Last time I checked I was not buried 6 feet into the ground. Which is indeed a good thing. Ouch, was that kick really necessary? Well, I can understand your physical abuse because I am a slacker. Sorry. It's hard to keep up with everything. I suck at being organized.
  • Reviewed by: LolaRaysAutoGirl on 03/12/2005
    Are you still alive???

    Author's Response: Yes, I am so sorry. I'm working on the next chapter...this story is still breathing.
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