It’s a great beginning and I can’t wait to read more!
I totally love the way she gets confused by the twins and I would love to see the photos she took of them making a huge mess of the venue :D
Your punctuation is alright! I still found some long sentences that could be separated but it’s still easy to read them nonetheless :)
I like the summary you choose! It gives you enough hints of what to expect but doesn’t give too much away ❤️Author's Response: Thank you!
I will work on my sentances a little better for the next chapter ☺️ ❤️