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  • Reviewed by: Saphira on 01/18/2018 🚩
    You know that I loved the first part of this chapter, but the second part made me laugh out loud!! I really enjoyed it, especially the truth or dare scenes! I can really imagine them doing that :D

    Author's Response: Thank you so much ❤️❤️

    Author's Response: Thank you so much ❤️❤️
  • Reviewed by: Makemesparkle on 01/13/2018 🚩
    Can't wait for the next chapter - I really enjoyed this!

    Author's Response: Thank you, working on it as we speak ☺️
  • Reviewed by: Saphira on 01/09/2018 🚩
    It’s a great beginning and I can’t wait to read more!
    I totally love the way she gets confused by the twins and I would love to see the photos she took of them making a huge mess of the venue :D

    Your punctuation is alright! I still found some long sentences that could be separated but it’s still easy to read them nonetheless :)

    I like the summary you choose! It gives you enough hints of what to expect but doesn’t give too much away ❤️

    Author's Response: Thank you! I will work on my sentances a little better for the next chapter ☺️ ❤️