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  • Reviewed by: Saphira on 12/30/2017 🚩
    I kinda thought they would stay on the beach ;)
    Anyway, I liked the beginning of your story and how you described their situations. You do have some mistakes in the first part of the story, like calling β€œyour” friends Brooke and Emma and I had to figure out how Summer fit into it 😹 that might be because English isn’t my first language though ;)
    Anyway, Iβ€˜d like to read more :)

    Author's Response: THIS FEELING IS LOVE. Reviewed by: Makemesparkle on 12/31/2017 🚫 ❇ 🚩 Ahh thank you!! Haha well they take it back to his room, in the middle of writing it now, it's a bit x-rated πŸ™ŠπŸ™ˆ Yes, there were a few mistakes I'd missed - thanks for letting me know, have gone back and changed them. Next chapter up tomorrow hopefully!! :)

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