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  • Reviewed by: benjisbabygrl on 01/29/2011 🚩
    just leave it .... it is fine just the way it is
  • Reviewed by: Special Emma on 01/29/2011 🚩
    Absolutely love it! It's beautiful!

    I recommend leaving it as a stand alone. Just cause it's so elegant as it is now. But one thing that would be cool is like, a back story, as if maybe he knew the girl or something? Not a long story, a few chapters maybe. I'd read it, help write even! Just an idea! :P

    Again, awesome. Loved it!
  • Reviewed by: punk_rock_barbiedoll on 01/26/2011 🚩

    I like it the way it is.

    Great story :)

    Sad....but still, very good.



    Author's Response: Thank you! I had the crash part written and wasn't totally sold on any of my ideas for what would happen after. Then this came. It's definitely sad, but it has that unbreakable brotherly love between the twins that makes it kind of beautiful. Glad you enjoyed it =)

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