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  • Reviewed by: Saphira on 11/30/2017 🚩
    Wonderful ❤️
  • Reviewed by: Legna_angeL on 11/30/2009 🚩

    Bodies, shells, and names...but damn they are some gorgeous shells :D  And you, dear one, are a tease!  My jaw dropped just before Jaden came in and I am thinking "Threesome?!"  (hangs head)  Alas!  It wasn't meant to be...sigh...  ;)



    Author's Response: Well, you know, life doesn't always bring you the good stuff. :) But, you know, I actually happen to know a story (or two) where you can read all about that threesome ;)
  • Reviewed by: Tionne on 12/08/2008 🚩
    THE SHOES! Oh my God, you let the shoes burn! Fuck the guitars and the prizes and the furniture, but... THE SHOES! You are an evil, evil girl. ... But you are a great, great writer. This was a fun piece. I like the twist in the middle. At first I thought it would be going into a different direction, but you ended up somewhere else, which was so much more fun. I love how everything turned - the tone and the feeling and the plot, even - when Jaden entered the room (aka the story), and we got to know her side of the story. The proposal was awsome. You know me, I'm a sucker for memoral, dramatic moments or gestures (I always try to be a hardass about it, but I'm just not... I'm just a "romantic" at heart.) And I thought the house burning was better than candles burning. I love the idea. I wish I had had it! So, ultimately, it was just a great story! I adore it!

    Hon, I'm very sorry that it took me so long to review it. But you know I neglected this site and fan fiction in general, so I didn't get to read anything lately. But starting again with one of your pieces was a great choice. Especially since I found a perfect definition in it. “They don’t write about us. They don’t know us, our personalities. These are just shells. Bodies and names. Nothing less, nothing more. It’s just that: fan-fiction.” This is perfect, because it's just so true. You hit the nail right over the head.

    I could keep on praising you. But I feel like I'm just rambling on stupidly. So let me just sum it up by saying: I love this. Awesome job. Keep up the good work! Much love!

    Author's Response: Oh GOD! Why did they put that delete button there? I almost deleted your review!!! Thank you so much for your awesome review :) I had so much fun writing it, and it makes me happy when someone leaves such a sweet review. :) Romantic is not bad at all, but I'm just saying it, I can't take compliments and any romantic things either :D You wish you had had the house burning? With all your shoes? Really? I don't think so :P But it was undoubtedly a memorable way :D About the definition, well, I think it's just an overall truth to any kind of fan fiction, that's why people shouldn't freak over some made up little story. Thank you again for your kind words, and don't worry, you have nothing on me when it comes to stupid rambling. You should see it on 100 questions.. oops :D Love!!
  • Reviewed by: MellowPac on 06/05/2008 🚩
    Uhm hi, I want more. :D

    Author's Response: Uhm hi, it's a one-shot :D lol, thanks anyway. :) I haven't written anything that worths sharing for months. Maybe later :)
  • Reviewed by: PaintPastelPrincess on 06/01/2008 🚩
    super cute!

    love the proposal gone awry!

    Author's Response: haha :D thank you very much sweetie:)

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